Flowers

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    Flowers

    Flowers in the field

    lined up in perfect beauty

    the field is flowing

    with water and streams

    birds flying above

    the beautiful scene shinning with colors

    I have never seen

    I reached out to take one

    I could not touch

    it was a magical field

    that came right up

    when your imagination begins to believe

    many possibilities can be seen

    so let your mind flow with different thoughts

    you will be amazed what pops up

    so be a child at times

    it will help your mind

     never give up

    on the things

    you do.

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    icarus0580 commented on Flowers

    08-24-2009

    Really like this poem. I find that at times it reminds me of some of my writing. It has a very interesting flow, not all even, but very smooth, if that makes any sense. Well done, thanks for sharing

    blackshadow

    08/24/2009

    thank you very much for coming back to read just to sit back and watch the flowers dance and sing is a beautiful thing

    blackshadow

    08/24/2009

    thank you very much for coming back to read just to sit back and watch the flowers dance and sing is a beautiful thing

    Tempy commented on Flowers

    08-24-2009

    young at heart but old enough not too old not a baby or too young creative mind undefined

    blackshadow

    08/24/2009

    young is the flower that rises up from the ground to a time of beauty thank you for coming back to read

    blackshadow

    08/24/2009

    young is the flower that rises up from the ground to a time of beauty thank you for coming back to read

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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