Folds

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  • Grito
  • GRITO PASSED AWAY ON DECEMBER 17TH, 2010 All the poems I post here are my own and are © ed. Thank you for your visit!.

Folds

All in a flight,
with words that sting,
she is so dressed,
she does desist,
in summer shoes,
in summers dress.
Honorably then 
to so nobly refrain
before this coveted wing,
to reach the height
in this fawn yet frail scape.

This course has chases,
has paths well seen.
In its pale breath swells
our longing beats
as it revels
in what we can share and may be
and how we
weave
it all along with the chime of bells 
to lose the cold of chill sleets.

In each a spark,
a sparse reminder
always there,
would we to saunter in the lark,
to feign,
to now embark
and know
the lust left now
of one another
and an once to be so serene.

All in a flight,
she is to hale,
she does insist,
me to impale.
To her I sing
from dark hooded cape,
but neath this wing,
tis our escape.

This is a course,
a path well seen,
the finale paints
in feathers mien,
where she once was and we have been,
and now to believe it is beneath the silk of warm sheets.

So good to see that you are well,
and the hope tomorrow holds,
the dark clouds huddled
have no way to dispel.
The song of doves will help you there
and in its folds
you'll see I care.

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knight4696 commented on Folds

12-29-2009

Steamy and Passionate ..Very nice mix! :) You once again are able to bring such beautiful visuals with your words! Very Nice. Ken

Grito

12/30/2009

Thank you Ken, I guess I am a romantic!!!

AIXA commented on Folds

07-03-2009

Expressing full passion of your soul, for pure color red, together with a young girl crowling under the sheets, under the bed.

Grito

07/04/2009

Thank you dear loved one!

optimistic commented on Folds

07-02-2009

This was a passionate piece expressing true passion for another great word desription had me holding my stomach with its deep irony and impact.

Grito

07/03/2009

So true optimistic,thank you for your gracious words and visit!

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