Forbidden Love

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    Forbidden Love

    He stood upon the cliffs awaiting the sunrise
    Watching as the last of the moon descended
    Anticipating the light meeting the sea
    Listening to the waves kissing the shore.

    As the tips of light began to reflect
    He saw her on the rocks below
    Sable hair embracing her shoulders
    Skin so pale against the sea washed rocks

    He watched as she finger combed her tresses
    Humming softly to the morn
    A siren song to warm and greet him
    Watching, yearning, wanting more.

    She must have felt his eyes upon her
    Green met fawn linking sea and sky
    Caressing, calling, passions rising
    Heart beats crashing with the tides

    Both knew magic in their souls
    Part man, part hawk he spread his wings
    On gentle currents down he drifted,
    Softly landing on the shore.

    But soul mates they could never be
    For she was not his kind
    Through eyes that glistened with briny tears
    She bidden him good life and goodbye

    For her world was not of air and sun
    Her world was wet and blue
    She donned her skin and swam away
    As selkie maidens do.

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    coacher commented on Forbidden Love

    11-21-2009

    Well done. This write awakens the senses of the reader.

    blu commented on Forbidden Love

    05-15-2009

    I really enjoy your creativity.

    LeLover commented on Forbidden Love

    03-25-2009

    Wonderful!

    JEAGLEFEATHER commented on Forbidden Love

    03-21-2009

    Very well written. It is a great piece. Justin

    WordSlinger commented on Forbidden Love

    03-21-2009

    3rd stanza, very sexy, this poem is hot, pass me some gloves (10)

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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