Less is more

Easy:
1.Must 5 lines
2.Cannot contain any pronouns
3.Must have a nature reference

Medium:
Must contain easy requirement and
no adjectives.

Hard:
Must contain easy and medium requirements and
no adverbs.

Re: Less is more

Here's my take....

Easy:

Morning rests hesitantly
in fancy coffee mugs
on dark oak dining tables

waking the diligents beside
newsprint and severed forests


Medium:

With head bowed
the boy wept

A bird amongst the
fallen acorns
in silence

Re: Less is more

Last edited by UnworthyFather 06-18-2009 at 08:06:35 PM

Comatose

My mind wanders aimlessly,
My head bobbles as a fan whirs...somewhere?
Dreams come in unison, sporadically.
I startle, as a bird flutters by the window,
Six rings of a phone...silence again, only louder.


kmooney
6-19-2009

Last edited by kmooney 06-19-2009 at 12:49:15 PM

Down de Ocean

A wave breaks as a seagull rises from the foam,
A sudden breeze suggests a possible storm.
The sun bakes the sand while clouds billow like lost balloons,
A distant ship rests in the palm of my hand,
Quiet is the only thing I hear...


kmooney
6-19-2009

Re: Less is more

Little black boy

Frozen strawberries
spotted porch
basketball
hankerchief
no love.

Clandestine

Cloaked in secrecy, codes concealed,
Confidential matters, purposes unrevealed,
Hidden cryptic messages, shrewd shrouded signs,
Forbidden formed relations, classified by design,
Enigmatic situations of the clandestine kind.