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New challange

08-13-2009 at 11:35:01 AM
  • lovepoet1017
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New challange

my challange is write a poem comparing job hunting and looking for that special someone

08-24-2009 at 09:36:43 AM

Re: New challange

Forest of love



In the forest of love
Surrounded with guns
Men and woman
You name it
The forest of love
Did not care
Who was there?
But the pain that reflects
The ones they love
Hunting and shooting
For the love in the forest
When suddenly someone drops
With tearing of glory

09-02-2009 at 04:44:47 PM

Re: New challange

LIFE’S CHANGES
NEW JOB, NEW MATE?

The time’s come for changing
Once more in my life.
I’ve hunted and searched
In dark places and light,
To fill a great yearning
Obsessing my life,

I could love in the silence
Or turbulent strife
With the right motivation
And paid the right price.

I need a safe place
Somewhere at the center
Of one family’s Iife,
To nurture it’s growth
In the good times,
And in times of great strife.

I’ll give it my all, showing
Devotion and effort suffice,
To turn great affection,
Right in my direction

From the mix of confections
My newfound direction
Will attract to my life
Whatever comes next:
A new job
Or, God forbid,
A New wife!


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Last edited by devaamido 09-06-2009 at 07:13:59 PM

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