UPA NEW Forum Open Challenge

Called the weather challenge but there is a twist. So don't rush to quickly.
You need to write a poem with the scene being in a weather condition. The second part is you have to make the emotions in a certain way Like this. Rainy and giggles.
Here is your list please pick one and good luck all of the Members will be doing the same challenge so you can see what were doing to get ideas. This one should be a little bit harder then the last but I am sure if you think outside the box you all will do well Plot121.


Weather -- Mood

Rainy -- Giggles
Cloudy Skies -- Somber Mood
Fog -- Drunk
Tornado -- Happy
Harracane Hysterical
Sunny -- Angery Or Sad
Hail -- Love
Flood -- High
Tsunami -- Glad

Good Luck

Last edited by Plot121 09-14-2009 at 06:51:36 PM

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not as good as a poem I would have written over a topic that I chose myself but these are meant to see what people can do and help one improve.

but here is my stab @ the challenge.

http://www.originalpoetry.com/waiting-for-a-ride

"I sit in the parking lot listening to some new tunes.
Every working day I'm here and it's fast becoming old news.
It's sunny
I'm hot
It's happy
I'm not

I sit in the car and make my way through the cd's.
Its' so fuckin hot, wont someone come and free me?
Such a beautiful day.
I'm chained up in misery.
Here it comes smiling...
Pretending that it's some friend to me.

I'm at the end of wits of doing this shit for a paycheck.
I feel held back somehow, like I'm not doing my best.
I put my heart in.
Still nothing comes out.
I could keep doing it again...
But I'm given my doubts.

There isn't a cloud around for what seems like miles upon miles.
Such a pretty day for the shitty mood I cant seem to file."

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Good Morning and Good Day Kochab,
I think you did a very nice job with this ,but I don't like the swear word and you being as GOOD as you are with words might think about the last two lines.They are good but you
could really wow 'em at the end .Just my opinion though it is your work.
Again very nice, and GOD BLESS.
Billy28 ;

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http://www.originalpoetry.com/silly-winds-of-the-night

Silly Winds of the Night

I went out of my door tonight
to walk to the store now.
It was rather windy and I
was tired and was feeling silly.
I walked past the hotel here
and the hotel apartments past the hotel.
Came to the mall's parking lot.
It was a cool breezy wind
at the mall's big parking lot.
I got to the Chick-fil-la
and spotted 4 state trooper cars.
I sneakily thought to myself, "What
such filthy bastards you cops are."
I walked down the hill
and off the sidewalk into the
road, giving future driver passerbys
my very special "Space Balls" salute.
Still breezy as I get to
the median, trying to get to
my destination and did the same.
I didnt care what people thought.
I just felt like I needed
to be a jerk for once.
After I got to my destination,
I went back through my route
again and after I got off
the median, I thought to myself,
"Haha, you bitches," as I crossed
the day-time busy road, feeling
rather silly in this constant wind.
I came home and finally, I
came back being myself and slept.

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Hi there Sidney,
I reread this three times I guess I am missing something here in between the lines.
Oh well ,I've been around I thought but I don't even know what space Balls are?
Well at least you had a nice ,safe walk and the cops didn't bother you and you got a good nights rest.
Billy28, maybe I should read this again in the morning? HEY !

SHOWERS OF GIGGLES UPA WEATHER CHALLENGE

http://www.originalpoetry.com/showers-of-gigglesupa-weather-challenge

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I have submitted a poem for the challenge. Rizz1. Thank you.

Re: UPA NEW Forum Open Challenge: Picture Challenge

http://www.originalpoetry.com/911-freedom

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The forum challenge title is called You Know You Love Me hope you enjoy it .
Plot121 AAKA Robert...

frozen orbital precipitation and the amorous feelings they inspire

Frozen orbital precipitation and the amorous feelings they inspire



Here it comes, hard and fast,
Straight from above, will it last…
HAIL!

How much can I take, will it hurt?
Pounding my body into the dirt…
HAIL!

Feeling it all over my skin,
Sweetness and painful sin…
HAIL!

I’m not sure I can take it any longer,
The feeling of climax is getting stronger…
HAIL!

Oh my God, faster and faster still!
Make me yours and break my will…
HAIL!

Here it comes as I cum again,
And just as I think its over, then…
HAIL!

The storm has receded, leaving me numb,
But I can still taste it on the tip of my tongue…
HAIL!

Sleep overtakes me here comes the dream,
All of those hailstones making me scream…
HAIL!

I wake in the morning all tattered and torn,
I impatiently wait for the next hailstorm…
…Hail!!

Last edited by Rygar 09-18-2009 at 08:37:04 AM

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ok here is the weather poem UPA challange
mine is called "The Bad Day"
http://www.originalpoetry.com/the-bad-day

I hope you enjoy

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The poem for the UPA Forum Open challenge for the Weather,
is Blinded by sight.
Rizz1. Sorry I got mixed up.