the internet is down
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the internet is downthe internet is down |
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Re: the internet is downComical but real and to the point.....very likeable with the simplicity it a good read |
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Re: the internet is downfunny...the frustration we all share at such moments is there...may I suggest a companion poem about taking the damned pc for granted when it's up and running. Your abrupt ending when it comes back on even suggests such a response. |
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the internet is downthe internet is truly amazing - i kid you not - |
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Re: the internet is downOkay, not bad. We all can relate, which makes this really good. But the OVER-repetition makes the poem a little.. less, to me. Certain things I can understand repeating: "call the cable company" or "check the router, the modem too." The redundancy is usually a bad idea in any poem, so use it carefully. |
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the internet is downThanks I'll keep that in mind ! |
Poetry is what is lost in translation.
Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.