STARDRIFT'S THE WORST THIRD OF A DAY FOR A LADYBUG

STARDRIFT'S WORST THIRD OF A DAY.


This poem is an excellent piece of "pathetic fallacy," wherein the poet gives a human mind to an insect, and then makes an incursion into that mind to sustain the theme of self-preservation and caution, as well as his feelings for, and his keen and sensitive observation of things and creatures of Nature.

Stardrift ,, you display , as in your other creations, that you are a perfectionist in your mastery of the iambic pentameter and your impeccable rhyming scheme.

My rating for this very sensitive and immaculately crafted piece is 10+

Last edited by cousinsoren 10-17-2009 at 10:00:59 AM

Re: THE POETRY OF STARDRIFT

Might be wrong..........I'm confused but I'll start............If ya want a chain or just single here ya go on a insect......

I walk fast and scurry
In the deep dark hall
Fast as a rabbit
I smartly move to a wall

Then the heavens quake
Fast as a snake
Slithering in the darkness
To catch it's prey and take

I am the roach
A simple bug
Better then ever
A natural slug

Quick I go
Faster then a snake
To hide in the hole
That I make

LOL.......there ya go!!!

Last edited by Dark 10-20-2009 at 09:05:14 PM

Re: Re: THE POETRY OF STARDRIFT

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dark

Might be wrong..........I'm confused but I'll start............If ya want a chain or just single here ya go on a insect......

I walk fast and scurry
In the deep dark hall
Fast as a rabbit
I smartly move to a wall

Then the heavens quake
Fast as a snake
Slithering in the darkness
To catch it's pray and take

I am the roach
A simple bug
Better then ever
A natural slug

Quick I go
Faster then a snake
To hide in the hole
That I make

LOL.......there ya go!!!

Last edited by cousinsoren 10-19-2009 at 09:07:21 PM