a request for help

Ladies, gentlemen anybody whom is ready and willing to read all types of poetry. Sad, happy, "poetic", etc., read all and critique all. tell the truth and let me know how it makes you feel or how you think it will make other people feel. I will return the favor. I feel that there is some excellent work out there that isn't being honestly read and I can do that for you as long as you do that for me. Thank you

Last edited by poeticluv1986 10-17-2009 at 09:19:30 PM

Re: At The Top!!!

The self proclaimed greatest at all that he does.
You know what... it's true.
I'm a poet I write this sh*t off the top of the dome
ain't none of this sh*t rehersed
I'm king of this throne.
I'm the baddest motha' (shut yo mouth)
sinse Shakespeare If you think you are great
challenge the greatest and let ya light SHINE!
My words will put you in the dirt i
make your hands, brain, and heart hurt
with my classic swag and poetic tag.


I'm the bomb: atomic, artistic and bionic.
My flow is harmonic when i speak you feel that sh*t
I'm just 22 years old not out sold,
and I will mold your thought into an explosive not
I slit ya throat with a pen and a pad
nigga you been had
don't get mad b/c I'm better
than you at what you love to do.
Dont hate the great be betta than let ya
light shine make our roads intertwine
and the day we meet try hard to beat me
b/c I'm out to crush you and any who of you clouns
that ain't ready to compete with this King
I'm the truth you can't defeat me with lies
I was born ready for you
Let ya lite SHINE!! for a second b/c
it won't be long before i get
to you so if you think you're betta than
me I will take some precious time out
to dimb your 100watts to 35
I have become the best by letting you know that I am
Wether you're from the North, South, East, or West
In this poetry game never say you're the best
and tarnish my name
Cause if I get to you I'll put your life and
so called "Craft" to shame
I am Emperial to this domain
So if you want to reach the top I'm the spirit,
the heart, the soul you have to face
I am poetry!!!