Who wants to be Set me FREE...

How can I trust you,

When I just realized that I don’t even know you

For years I followed where you led,

In hopes that I could eventually control you.

But now I must resist,

Because we both can’t exist,

In the same space or the same shape,

At the same time.

Because the truth is,

I must admit,

I’m becoming ambiguous.

And it’s beginning to seriously affect my mental state of mind.

Now I know that you were designed,

Programmed to seek and find.

The secrets that life keeps hidden.

But I refuse to fly blind,

Ignoring God’s symbols and signs.

And keep foolishly pursuing things that he has strictly forbidden.

So Good ridden,

Because this ain’t living.

I would rather be without you,

Then to keep submitting to your impulsive decisions.

Consequences and bad business,

Is all that I’ve received.

Allowing you to focus my attention,

On the things others have achieved.

So if you truly want what is best,

You’ll forget about me.

And release me from your unbreakable bond.

And set me free.

Haki “The HottestNewPoet” Natuwah"

Last edited by HakiNatuwah1 10-28-2009 at 01:36:30 PM

Re: Set me FREE...

(finger snaps) Oh that was HOT...NOICE...

Re: Set me FREE...

Thank you...I'm extremely honored that one of my pieces inspired the thought that brought this beautifully written piece to paper...or computer screen..lol...you are talented and I would love to keep in touch with you on a more consistent basis...us poets need to stick together...we are the enlighten minds of our time...once again my friend I Loved reading this piece...please keep writing and take a second to read some of my other pieces...I'm sure that they will equally inspire you...^_^...