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"Father, I Have Sinned..." (a new poem)

01-28-2010 at 11:10:47 AM

"Father, I Have Sinned..." (a new poem)

"Father, I Have Sinned..." (a new poem)

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Peace and Light,
Dah

01-29-2010 at 02:45:59 PM

RE: "Father, I Have Sinned..." (a new poem)

I have read your poem and think it is quiet possibly one of the finest I've read.
Paolo

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Originally Posted by dahlusion

"Father, I Have Sinned..." (a new poem)

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Peace and Light,
Dah

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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