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03-26-2010 at 01:53:43 PM

dahlusion
Posts: 662

720 Full Moons (a new poem of Life)

"...life is magic within magic, a grand illusion,
a cosmic crystal, a mystical pipe-line of souls seeking
physical sensations: sight, smell, sound, touch, and taste:
we are the magicians of our lives, the mystics, the wizards,
the shamans, and creators, the story-makers, story-tellers,
the editors and publishers:"

from the poem: 720 Full Moons (a new poem on Life)

Please read and comment,

Peace and Light,
Dah

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03-28-2010 at 05:58:02 AM

cousinsoren
Posts: 2031

RE: 720 Full Moons (a new poem of Life)

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Originally Posted by dahlusion

"...life is magic within magic, a grand illusion,
a cosmic crystal, a mystical pipe-line of souls seeking
physical sensations: sight, smell, sound, touch, and taste:
we are the magicians of our lives, the mystics, the wizards,
the shamans, and creators, the story-makers, story-tellers,
the editors and publishers:"

from the poem: 720 Full Moons (a new poem on Life)

Please read and comment,

Peace and Light,
Dah

I read it, and was mesmerized. I shall read and reread it to ingest the majesty of it, especially as it reminds me of "Invictus" by William E. Henley.
It is a far grwnder and more intricate poem than the "Invictus,"

Congratulations are deserved.

Last edited by cousinsoren 03-28-2010 at 05:59:22 AM

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03-31-2010 at 11:50:04 PM

Bettysrainbow48
Posts: 99

RE: RE: 720 Full Moons (a new poem of Life)

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Originally Posted by dahlusion

"...life is magic within magic, a grand illusion,
a cosmic crystal, a mystical pipe-line of souls seeking
physical sensations: sight, smell, sound, touch, and taste:
we are the magicians of our lives, the mystics, the wizards,
the shamans, and creators, the story-makers, story-tellers,
the editors and publishers:"

from the poem: 720 Full Moons (a new poem on Life)

Please read and comment,

Peace and Light,
Dah

I read it, and was mesmerized. I shall read and reread it to ingest the majesty of it, especially as it reminds me of "Invictus" by William E. Henley.
It is a far grwnder and more intricate poem than the "Invictus,"

Congratulations are deserved.

Dah, I like your poem. It is like putting together a lot of things in one short write. It's mistifing and good.I did read it twice. You can look at it in many different ways. It houses a light of it's own ,yet encloses many territories to choose from

Good Job It has a lot of feeling to it.

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