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Many Poems

04-30-2010 at 11:42:57 AM

Many Poems

Dear Friends,

I have taken a couple of days break away from "manuscript editing" to rest my spirit and to comment on your poems.

Even though I am not posting new poems at this time, there are several dozen poems of mine here on OP that have not been critiqued. When you have the time,
i would enjoy reading comments on these poems.

Peace and Light,
Dah kiss

Last edited by dahlusion 04-30-2010 at 11:43:33 AM

05-04-2010 at 08:10:41 PM

RE: Many Poems

[quote="dahlusion"]Dear Friends,

I have taken a couple of days break away from "manuscript editing" to rest my spirit and to comment on your poems.



Even though I am not posting new poems at this time, there are several dozen poems of mine here on OP that have not been critiqued. When you have the time,
i would enjoy reading comments on these poems.

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Your complaint is justified, Dah. I am having the same sad experience, for instance, thirteen (13) fellow poets read my,"Yeah,We Know." Yet I have 220 Friends. Few poets read ,my article, "WordSlinger's Preoccupation With Time in HIs Poetry.,". One poet whom I admire very much, suggested that it was no business of mine how Wordslinger writes.
I suspect that many of our OP Friends are shying away from poetry that demands a bit of appreciative or critical underatanding.. Let hem excoriate me for telling the truth.......................LOL

"I call to my defence my trusty shield and sword;
Let fierce opinions excoriate me if they wish;
I shall don my trusty armour
To summon a lyre and the word..
If the truth brings offence,
Then let the truth be my defence ;
In truth there is strength and power."

I shall read many of your poems, since you are up for Appreciation, as soon a I post " Wordslinger's Preo-occupation With Time In His Poetry (Part Two).

I am inviting my 220 OP Friends and more to read and think on it. THANks

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Last edited by cousinsoren 05-04-2010 at 08:42:24 PM

05-10-2010 at 10:28:11 PM

RE: RE: Many Poems

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Originally Posted by cousinsoren

[quote="dahlusion"]Dear Friends,

I have taken a couple of days break away from "manuscript editing" to rest my spirit and to comment on your poems.



Even though I am not posting new poems at this time, there are several dozen poems of mine here on OP that have not been critiqued. When you have the time,
i would enjoy reading comments on these poems.

###############################################################

Your complaint is justified, Dah. I am having the same sad experience, for instance, thirteen (13) fellow poets read my,"Yeah,We Know." Yet I have 220 Friends. Few poets read ,my article, "WordSlinger's Preoccupation With Time in HIs Poetry.,". One poet whom I admire very much, suggested that it was no business of mine how Wordslinger writes.
I suspect that many of our OP Friends are shying away from poetry that demands a bit of appreciative or critical underatanding.. Let hem excoriate me for telling the truth.......................LOL

"I call to my defence my trusty shield and sword;
Let fierce opinions excoriate me if they wish;
I shall don my trusty armour
To summon a lyre and the word..
If the truth brings offence,
Then let the truth be my defence ;
In truth there is strength and power."

I shall read many of your poems, since you are up for Appreciation, as soon a I post " Wordslinger's Preo-occupation With Time In His Poetry (Part Two).

I am inviting my 220 OP Friends and more to read and think on it. THANks

Ok folks follow me lets go over to cousinsorens who has been there for us .Lets check his poems out!!!!! Are you ready????? Lets go!. Good poems a wait us............................................................................................................................
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gringrinsmilegringrin::smilegringrinLOLgrinrolleyes

Last edited by Bettysrainbow48 05-10-2010 at 10:36:44 PM

05-10-2010 at 10:34:36 PM

RE: Many Poems

We would like to thank you cousinsoren for all the wonderful complements and work you put into working on and reading our poems, school and classes.Thank you very much. We appreciate it. Take a break, it is well earned.grinsmilegrincool smileexcaim

05-11-2010 at 06:23:07 AM

RE: RE: Many Poems

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Originally Posted by Bettysrainbow48

We would like to thank you cousinsoren for all the wonderful complements and work you put into working on and reading our poems, school and classes.Thank you very much. We appreciate it. Take a break, it is well earned.grinsmilegrincool smileexcaim


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Betty,. if you weren't so winsome, kind and sweet, I would compare you to such shadowy, airy things as angels...................LOL. THANKS you are like a tiny brook of inspiration meandering through tranquil hills and fertile valleys.

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Last edited by cousinsoren 05-11-2010 at 06:30:45 AM

05-11-2010 at 02:02:04 PM

RE: Many Poems

Thank you!smile

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.