Please read "The Comeback Kid"

Please read My poem "The Comeback Kid" And comment As Always I will return the favor Thanks. all the best -Marion-

RE: Please read "The Comeback Kid"

You silly!!!! Of course your friends wouldn't let you down!! That's granting they picked you up in the first place. Okay..I wouldn't let you down...mentally speaking of course..no wait that's figuratively speaking...and what a figure!!!...I..I..I mean..not like that..you know..the way you form your poems..yeah..that's it! Oh boy..I should just quit while I'm ahead!!!

Please read, The Comeback Kid, by Marion

I read your poem, Marion, and I truly enjoyed it...........thank you
for posting.....................................................................gogant

RE: Please read "The Comeback Kid"

Marion, I enjoyed the aggressive tone and entertaining craftmanshhip of your poem It reminds me of William Henley's "Invictus"., but you are more down-to- earth..........earthy. .......LOL. Kudos.

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