Harmless Little Swig...

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Marsink
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LUST POTION NINE

In torcherous regret by mortal thought, set
There's blood let from pools in my mind
Consorting with lust betrays morals, just
In an alley where wraiths steal me blind

Query: "My heart, will this trance impart
Malevolence inside, or benevolence deride!?"
For the return investing is conscience detesting.
With a toast, I swill Lust Potion Nine.

Decanter discrete small, is passion enthralled,
With no threshold known to this drinker.
Ingesting darklight of deception tonight:
Laughing moon has its way calling thither.

Earth, wind and fire dance on desire;
Depravity grows well in blood's garden.
Stir in lost soul and morph into troll,
Beholding grace and wisdom break, hardened.

The form of my brain: a rogue trackless train;
Boarding zombies who, like me, are hoarding
Wind blown images by lust's own scrimmages
Fuel for engine, vile, without pardon.

At an accident scene is carnage careened.
Rubber-neckers gawking for more:
Is there coincidence to intaking incidents?
Lust Potion Nine, down cold throat softly slithers.

Shattered lull, exploiting control,
Vibe masses of trysting hot bodies.
The focus of eyes, though unrealized
Spent to obtain prize in thoughts, haughty.

Repeating rhythm like stylus in groove,
Demanding a power to lord over:
Is primal, instictive, as animals move;
Brutally foraging, explicitly naughty.

Cannibals like cancer, eat live shreds;
Helter joins skelter, hacking feverishly.
Terror-void tictims become living dead,
Lust Potion Nine poisoning hearts withered.

This mystical distractive, radioactive dope
Contains no redeeming isotope
The influential power is dark's addiction
For our nature coaxes self-infliction.

Its an espionage chess play in our mind
Intaking drink emboldens soul's warden--

...Reflected image
Mirrors Doppleganger Captor...

Last edited by Marsink 09-16-2010 at 03:24:11 PM

RE: Harmless?

LUST POTION NINE

GREAT "gut" poem! I hit me in the stomach!.................LOL

RE: Harmless?

LUST POTION NINE

GREAT "gut" poem! I hit me in the stomach!.................LOL

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