Redemption

Just posted a new poem called "Redemption",well really an old old poem. I was getting down the christmas stuff from the loft and I found my old book of hand written poems, I was looking over some of the original drafts and came across a poem I had lost through the years and totally fogotten about. To to the best of my memory, I think it is about 17 or 18 years old, I must have wrote it when I was about 14 or 15 year old. I would greatly appreciate any and all reviews and comments and will do my best to return the favor! Here is the quick link:http://www.originalpoetry.com/redemption_13 Purity of the soul, journey well!!! ANGEL