Serious Critique's

I am interested in sharing my poetry in order to gain some serious and insightful feed back, I'm new on this site and am not sure if this is where I should be? I must also admit that I am (and probably always will be) in kindergarten when it comes to computer's and computer language! I tend to get lost quite easily, If anyone is willing to give me some guidelines I would be most grateful!

Sincerely,

SEEDSOFGROWTH