Freedom

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    my friend told me to write a poem about bricks, homos, n hooker boots....so here it is ;D

    Freedom

    Far beyond the horizon,
    your wall lies in ruins.
    Brick stacked on brick.
    Barricading your soul.
    Your truths no longer hidden,
    I see you,
    a man,
    with another man.
    Your quivering mind,
    like the hooker boot of existence,
    cowers behind charades of sex and lust.
    The sun now never rises for you.
    The forgiving light,
    never more caresses you cheek.
    I will stack the bricks once more
    to hide the delicate world from your grasp.
    They need not be tainted by your lecherous hands.
    We can now all live safely
    above the sky, alone.

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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

    Tony’s Poems (79)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    Escape 0
    Simplicity 1
    Unser Leben....Our Life 0
    Nie...Never 0
    Freedom 0
    Recoil 0
    Du & Me 0
    Lass Uns Rennen....Let Us Run 0
    Menschen...Hu
    mans
    0
    Wiederholung.
    ..Repitition
    0
    Balance 0
    Finality 1
    Zusammen...To
    gether
    0
    Für Dich....For You 1
    Mein Geist....My Mind 0
    Uns.....Us 0
    Fall......Fal
    l
    0
    Falschen Anschuldigung
    en...False Accusations
    0
    Sicherheit...
    Safety
    0
    Brech Aus...Break Out 0
    Shadow 0
    Cold 0
    Certitude 0
    Truth 0
    Consciousness 0
    Sacrifice 0
    Two Become One 0
    Sleep 0
    Broken 1
    Punishment 0
    Reality 0
    Warranted Infliction 0
    Sky 1
    Solitude 0
    Future 0
    Lies 0
    Rules 1
    Unavoidable 0
    Empty 0
    Maze 0
    Alone 0
    Sporadic 0
    Struggle 0
    Impossible 0
    Ambush 0
    Life's Song 0
    Geh....Go 0
    Nicht Mehr.......No More 0
    "Gods" 1
    Wonders 0
    Das Ende.....The End 0
    Vengance 0
    Obstacle 0
    Gone 0
    Ewigkeit....E
    ternity
    0
    Release 0
    Hidden 2
    Incapable 1
    Breakdown 1
    Guardian Soldiers 1
    One Who Once Was 0
    Creative Process 0
    What Am I? 1
    The Overpowering Desire 5
    Spirit 1
    Insanity 2
    Constantly 1
    Present Existence 5
    Pain Inside 1
    Liebe.... Love 1
    Banning Books 3
    Iron Man 0
    What You Do 2
    Someone 9
    IDK 6
    Deprivation 12
    In Return 3
    Identity 3
    It 5