(..From the beginning to the end..)

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    (..From the beginning to the end..)


    (..From the beginning to the end..)

    ..I'm an angel of death that was banished from heaven..
    ..Did you lay with the sinners or pray with the reverends?..
    ..I'll admit I died with no soul..
    ..But you won't know where your going till your body's a ghost..
    ..And I said..

    ..I can't help that I died with no life..
    ..I can't help what I said or how I survived..
    ..But all I know is I wish I could take it all back..
    ..As my body burns and the sky turns to black..

    ..Are you going to hell or heaven..
    ..Did you lay with the sinners or pray with the reverends..
    ..I'll admit I died with no soul..
    ..But you won't know where your going till your body's a ghost..
    ..And He said..

    ..Depart from me I don't Know you..
    ..And I Said bitch what the fuck do I own you..
    ..He said..
    ..That the life I lived was a lie..
    ..I shouldn't have let it pass and the lights flickered by!..

    ..Are you going to hell or heaven..
    ..Did you lay with the sinners or pray with the reverends..
    ..I'll admit I died with no soul..
    ..But you won't know where your going till your body's a ghost..
    ..And we prayed..

    ..The world is going to hate us in the end..
    ..When there surrounded by nothing but fire..
    (echo)..nothing but the fire..(echo)
    ..I guess thats just how they'll live..
    ..When death is there only desire..

    ..From the beginning to the end..

    ..I sit here stuck in my own grim reality..
    ..My body's frying like a little kids mind watching TV!..
    ..I guess I'll have to work my way to the top..
    ..Shooting down all these ass-wholes that think they rock!..

    ..Are you going to hell or heaven..
    ..Did you lay with the sinners or pray with the reverends..
    ..I'll admit I died with no soul..
    ..But you won't know where your going till your body's a ghost..
    ..And we prayed..

    ..The world is going to hate us in the end..
    ..When there surrounded by nothing but fire..
    (echo)..nothing but the fire..(echo)
    ..I guess thats just how they'll live..
    ..When death is there only desire..

    ..From the beginning to the end..

    ..I know I didn't lead a god sent perfect life..
    ..But you know what!
    ..Damn it I tried!..
    ..Time is passing by like the flames of my sin..
    ..Now I'll serve my time..

    ..From the beginning to the end..

    (TheAngelOfDeath)




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    RHPeat commented on (..From the beginning to the end..)

    06-12-2009

    Hey angel there is a difference between (your) and (you're) meaning (you are.) It would help to keep the meaning straight instead of using (your) when you actually mean (you're). In this poem I find it hard to understand where the shifts in voice take place. I suggest ether quotes or stanza breaks when the voice changes.
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    am2anangel commented on (..From the beginning to the end..)

    05-27-2009

    excellent poem we really never know where we will go when we die or if such a place exists. your writing is very visual and helps your reader to imagine the pictures you paint with words.
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    extrarib commented on (..From the beginning to the end..)

    05-26-2009

    Wow!! Very well written, very passionate, you got my attention! incredable! This is the first one I have read, I'm guessing I'll read more!
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    beautifuldeath commented on (..From the beginning to the end..)

    05-19-2009

    I really enjoyed this. another powerfully written piece. I loved it. you really put some good thoughts into this one. 10 from me
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