Frozen

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Ok so, me and my exboyfriend just had a huge break up. I still really care about him but he's moved on in fact, he cheated on me and broke up with me in a text all while I was out of town and had no contact with anyone at home. This is a poem I wrote before that when I felt our reltionship dieing.

Frozen

You say so many things
And hold me so close to whisper things in my ear
You tell me you love me
You tell me you will always be there

But then you walk away
To be with her
You smile so happy
Like it never is when you look at me

I will not deney that I love you
I don't want to let us go
But dear
If you do not want me
If you don not need me
If your heart seekes abouther
If you dream of anouther
If you do not love me
Just let me go

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spbsdude commented on Frozen

11-24-2010

Not all love is meant to last forever, especially not young love. But there is a special someone waiting out there for each of us if we don't stop hoping and believing. Trouble is we sometimes have to go through a number of broken hearts to get to that someone.

ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on Frozen

11-15-2010

It's hard to love someone who doesn't love you back. Mend your broken heart and move on. You are worthy to be loved just the way you are. I enjoyed this write. Well done.......E

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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