FUSTRATED

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FUSTRATED

Furrious lies
Underneath me
So stressfull and
Tired of fighting,
Even though
Roughness is in our relationship
Are you still going to love me?
Till death do us part?
Ever lasting love
Does us good.

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dragongarcia commented on FUSTRATED

02-10-2012

nice poem. short but sweet. just like most things in life

Artie commented on FUSTRATED

02-20-2010

I like the overall feeling that no matter how much turmoil you go through, you still want to see it thru.

medcat commented on FUSTRATED

06-09-2009

It sounds sad, but with a kinda happy ending. No violence should be tollerated by any woman. Good job expressing how she feels without prejiduce.

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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