GIRL IN MIND

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    GIRL IN MIND

    There was this girl so sweet and kind
    so many things going on in her mind
    money was tight she tried to be nice
    so many things locked , locked up in side
    it's a wonder she's still alive
    she walk around in a mixed up world
    see a man wonders does he follow
    things she been through are so unreal......
    people she knows, knows how she feels
    there so much pain in her life
    makes you wonder ; how many times did she try to take her life
    from drugs to alochol to coming clean
    she still hangs in there ,in there for me
    she must be strong to let us in if it were me I
    would have done myself in
    her life was rough from drug to sex
    when she was young she love to skip
    nobody know what she's been throught
    except the ones she ran too
    this girl , this girl
    i won't reveal: because this girl is all so real
    Lydia Goodwi( 96)


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    cmlestrade commented on GIRL IN MIND

    07-17-2009

    Nice poem Lydia. The story belongs to so many girls. Sharing it may help somebody. I enjoyed reading this.

    frankson03 commented on GIRL IN MIND

    04-21-2009

    i really enjoyed this poem. tell the gurl, dont be fooled, there is sumbody who knows her every move. adversity doesnt mean the end of the world, but proof of life everlasting.

    Lydia

    07/17/2009

    You are so right I moved on happily married one whole week july4th was the big day thank you

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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