Give Back

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Give Back

I never really liked those things.
I mostly agreed to only hide the fact.
Arguements maintained,
I was only holding back.

What a moment to call my own.
Free amongst all I've ever believed.
Darkness is overwhelmed with all that I've achieved.

The ladder broke while you were half way high.
Caught you stumbling to contol your fall.
Bloody Mary laughed her way to the bottom.
You weren't in control at all.

What a moment to call my own.
Free amongst all I've ever believed.
Darkness is overwhelmed with all that I've achieved.

So step back
let's find slack
let's give back
the message is no longer hidden
and that's that

What a moment to call my own.
Free amongst all I've ever believed.
Darkness is overwhelmed with all that I've achieved.


    1x4ditty

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sammia commented on Give Back

04-27-2010

Very deep, the flow and wording are great. I'm going to add this one to the faves

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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