God created women Men Created Barbies

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    God created women Men Created Barbies

    God created women, after he thought of man. With a womb that would bare his children Ans a hidden modesty engraved in her essence. An ability to create A little bit of him in them. Men created barbies to make up for what they lacked. A miniture of the real thing Unflawed all the same Glossy- Manufactured Not pertaining the beauty or remblence of their original models. Nothing but overrated ideals and false truths Another race all their own, BUT latltly- Ive become perpleed. Theres no question of morality or that of what consitutes as a big chest. The lines of whats real, plastic, and whats not no llonger exist. Morphing together from the unknown. Full of unequal beuty And uneven distrubution of what men want. Theyve lost themselves. Womanhood confided to their box mentalities. And for what? Who for? Was it worth losing yourself Barbie? Youve conformed oh so well. Letting them bleed us from our proper places Gpd created women, Men created Barbies, Both of them created who I am, who i was For today I can see and I have that power to create God Created Women Men created Barbies but I am who i am not who they want.

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    Artie commented on God created women Men Created Barbies

    07-09-2010

    Excellent!! The title alone speaks volumes, and takes a serious stab at society (men and women). There are so many things in our world that either cant wait to change us, label us, or use us. You really got my mind running with this one- thx - 10 from me

    redbloodink commented on God created women Men Created Barbies

    06-27-2010

    "I am who I am not what they want....." WoW cause God created us in His image women, men not that far apart..... A few differences....... both longing for true and real love...... what a great tstimony of Jesus in a subtle way...... red

    ginga commented on God created women Men Created Barbies

    04-27-2010

    chalkout, Excellent sentiment and rational in this poem that I totally agree with. The sad part is that Barbie made someone lots of $, (albeit not sad for them). I loved the attitude of this treatise of the plastic woman doll. ginga

    LadyLuck commented on God created women Men Created Barbies

    04-18-2010

    definitly an exceptional piece, i love it and it is so true

    kpeery09 commented on God created women Men Created Barbies

    04-03-2010

    Very Nice...I like it, it makes you think what if men did create barbies just for there pleasure or something you know. I give you 10

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