God was my defense

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    I always wanted to be different

    God was my defense

     I was concerned about the way I thought, but noone seemed to care
    The world rejected all of me including what I'd wear
    The way I summed up problems and the choices that I made
    It seperated me from you because I did things my way
    Regardless of how big your were or the trouble you may bring
    I would not submit to you or give you anything
    Deep inside my soul and spirit is where I stored my strength
    Holding onto Gods promises was solely my defense

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    ahardwalk commented on God was my defense

    03-03-2011

    This is a beautiful write!!!!! So true to how so many of us feel
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    winterkou commented on God was my defense

    01-06-2011

    Good write , nice message you share. I write alot about God myself. God bless bro.
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    Olan01 commented on God was my defense

    10-23-2010

    A good write, my friend, and I would like you to message me when you post. Olan
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    henryb3 commented on God was my defense

    09-01-2010

    I see it has been awhile,please focus on your writing talents,This poem shows you are capable of writing with the best.Missing your work and thanks for that you have shared.
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    1990lh commented on God was my defense

    05-14-2010

    amazing poem seem so powerfula and strong and your words were perfect. thxs for sharing
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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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