God was my defense

29 Comments

Tags:
  • Philosophy

    Poem Commentary

    I always wanted to be different

    God was my defense

    I was concerned about the way I thought, but noone seemed to care
    The world rejected all of me including what I'd wear
    The way I summed up problems and the choices that I made
    It seperated me from you because I did things my way
    Regardless of how big your were or the trouble you may bring
    I would not submit to you or give you anything
    Deep inside my soul and spirit is where I stored my strength
    Holding onto Gods promises was solely my defense

    Poem Comments

    (29)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    ahardwalk commented on God was my defense

    03-03-2011

    This is a beautiful write!!!!! So true to how so many of us feel

    winterkou commented on God was my defense

    01-06-2011

    Good write , nice message you share. I write alot about God myself. God bless bro.

    Olan01 commented on God was my defense

    10-23-2010

    A good write, my friend, and I would like you to message me when you post. Olan

    henryb3 commented on God was my defense

    09-01-2010

    I see it has been awhile,please focus on your writing talents,This poem shows you are capable of writing with the best.Missing your work and thanks for that you have shared.

    1990lh commented on God was my defense

    05-14-2010

    amazing poem seem so powerfula and strong and your words were perfect. thxs for sharing

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    christliked’s Poems (26)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    God was my defense 29
    Wadling in pain 12
    I can forgive but cant forget 7
    Good news 3
    My almighty 6
    I cant forget you 2
    How I found you 6
    I'm sharing 1
    My kind of love 12
    I remember 12
    Striped of all dignity 12
    Loneliness 30
    YOUR SO VEIN 29
    When up is all there is 42
    Winning the fight 17
    My journey 29
    My summary 6
    A Poem for Karma885 15
    SDRIPT 1
    Call to Duty 11
    Crazy in love to 5
    Crazy in love 10
    Black Sheep 12
    Don't take this personal 14
    You Offend Me 22
    hisPresence 28