Gone in Pain

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    Gone in Pain

    You hit me hard.
    Your smashes on my face.
    They just blew me away.
    You smashed my head.
    You threw me in bed.
    You killed my soul.
    My wreckless soul.
    You grabbed my arm.
    And twisted it,
    Like it were some band.
    We both heard the crack.
    And you just ran.
    While I lay hear all beat up.
    Helpless.
    Like I were something worthless.
    Blow.
    Crack.
    Smash.
    Twist.
    Grab.
    And you just left me there to feel all the pain.
    Now my soul is ruined.
    My faith has all left.
    Im terrified you will come back.
    I feel your anger.
    I want to scream.
    I dare not let out a single breath.

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    cmlestrade commented on Gone in Pain

    08-01-2009

    This is so good. Whenever I read a poem that makes me think this is a real situation, whether it is or not, I know I am reading the works of an exceptional writer. You go girl, keep on writing.

    writingislove

    08/02/2009

    Thank you so much. I really appreciate it. It is people like you who keep me writting. I do not always believe that I am supposed to write, but I do because I clear my conscience that way, and it is always enjoyable to hear that I am worth the while to write. :]

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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