Gone is my Sunshine

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Gone is my Sunshine

You dug inside,
Brushing my Heart
And Caressing my Soul
Sweeping past my Lips,
Soothing my Mind,
While Manifesting your Intentions
With your Delicate Fingers


Your Whisper finds my Ears
Like a Calming Breeze O'er the Shore,
Wandering down my Canal
Calling to every Receptor,
Dispatching a Wave Of Spazmic Horripilation
across my Flesh,
Only to leave me Hollow inside


My body but a Shell
of the Man I used to Be,
Now you are gone
This Truth I cannot see,
You were my Sunshine
But Night has come to Stay,
I am Certain, We'll meet again Someday

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Jes commented on Gone is my Sunshine

11-24-2010

Very nicely put. your flow is as always elegant.. U good

Savant commented on Gone is my Sunshine

08-06-2010

Very suggestive imagery. A beautiful love story. The best ones are the ones where love is lost and hope is gained. You mentioned being a hollow shell and it made me think of how they say you can hear the ocean in a shell...you can hear where that shell came from when it's hollow. i have lifted you up to me ear and I can hear where this piece came from. Good stuff.

kittman101 commented on Gone is my Sunshine

07-10-2009

i felt the lonliness comveyes within the words, of someone close that you are missing. But also acceptance knowing you will again meet one day.

Mandi commented on Gone is my Sunshine

07-07-2009

NNNOW that's poeetry not always sad not always happy llike real life excet I have to look up the big words

jmschwartz commented on Gone is my Sunshine

07-06-2009

beautiful. love the way it flows. makes me feel as if you let us in your heart and mind.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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