Gone

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  • Sadness

    Gone

    Deny the feelings in your heart that are strong

    Deny them long enough till' the right are wrong

    Feel the happiness, the warmth that you found

    Memorize the vibrations, the care exerted as sound

    But you deny to take the risk of having it all

    Fearing a love so strong it left you vulnerably disposable

    Now it's Gone

    And I have only the regrets and sorrow in awe

    Since I've done it again

    I've left the love die till' there was no one left

    Now I'm ashamed, only myself I blame

    As I've lost the only thing that made me sain.

    And once again the only thing in my heart is pain

    Now she's gone and no one but myself is acountable

    As everyday I become more and more abominable

    I won't be the same but I'll once again reframe

    From searching for that one

    Because all I've done is brung myself and them to shame.

    I feel I am no son

    Feelings owned By the pathetic

    So fucked up I resort to be apathetic

    So much confusion in my thoughts and emotions

    That I just freeze and relieve myself only of devotions

    Love has come and faded

    But Remains to be unyielded

    but not the kind I longed

    I fear I will never recover from this wrong

    As everyday I end with a school bell rung

    Gone is a chunk of me

    Just another hole for every one to see

    How I stand now is very troubling

    As My desire to be scorn and vanished

    Overwhelms My majority

    As she's gone and to me she was everything

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    knight4696 commented on Gone

    04-14-2010

    Spacer- this one is okay - I can feel the longing in your words - but to be honest they felt forced. Forcing them to rhyme - it might have been better to just write the emotions - rather than making them rhyme - don't get me wrong - I like the poem's concept and context - it just needs a little work to help it flow better. Nice work nonetheless. :)

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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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