Gone

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  • Lost Love

    Gone

    At night when the pain's the deepest and the tears
    streak down my face.
    I try to imagine myself in your arms, in a better
    time and place.

    Sometimes you're like a whisper, at other times,
    you're a scream heard in the dark.
    But nothing can ever fill the void, that I have
    in my heart.

    You were the best, the worst, my love, my curse.
    the reason that love lived.
    You were the questions and the answers.
    A little take and a lot of give.

    Now time doesn't seem to matter, the world is
    standing still.
    The hurt may fade for others, for me?
    it never will!

    Gone are all our hopes and dreams, gone are all
    the plans we made.
    Today, tomorrow and forever, is just a tear
    away.

    You were my heartbeat and my shadow.
    the lines upon my face.
    Now you are the emptyness, that no one can
    replace.

    Memories and moments, the wind that fills
    my sail.
    Everyday, I pass the minutes, everynight, I go through hell.

    But, you were the best, the worst, my love, my curse.
    The reason that love lived.
    You were the questions and the answers.
    a little take, but what I wouldn't give!

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    tierra7 commented on Gone

    11-22-2009

    oh my, i can relate, to the tears ~sigh~ ....to some of the emotions, to some of the pain, and to a lot of the memories ~sigh~ ..thank you for openin' the jacket to your soul....i wish you Happiness....God Bless, Terra (10+ )

    AbysmalGoddess commented on Gone

    04-23-2009

    it really makes you rethink things. this reminds me just how much i miss my man ):

    HeavenlyAngel commented on Gone

    01-17-2009

    i love this! so expressive... reminds me of my best friend who passed, i'll never find another like her! well done

    theblackpatita commented on Gone

    01-16-2009

    i felt the agony in you're peice, as it connotes a different tone of affliction.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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