Graywollff2001 got Swine Flu

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    Just missing friends.....

    Graywollff2001 got Swine Flu
    Heard you were sick
    sorry to say
    mucus was real thick
    but a bit better today
     
    hope you grow stronger
    find your energy
    then in bed
    you'll no longer be
     
    cuz there's money to make
    and bills to pay
    and you cant get it all done
    sick that way
     
    so eat you greens
    and sleep your eight
    soon enough
    you'll feel great
     
    back to work you'll go
    and soon you'll know
    it's mothers day
    you'll be able to pay
     
    no sugar though!
    i know it's true
    it's so yummy
    but it's not for you.
     
    Glad your well
    i know when you're sick your hell
    just wanted to say
    Happy Late Valentines Day
     
     
    Your forever friend,
     
    Rhonda
    aka Tempestlady
    www.originalpoetry.com

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    Tempy commented on Graywollff2001 got Swine Flu

    12-15-2010

    how great a write. I loved it. nice and funny at the same time, loved it.
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    Tempestlady

    12/15/2010

    Nice and funny just like he is. Thanks..

    dahlusion commented on Graywollff2001 got Swine Flu

    10-28-2010

    good rhymes and delivery. Bravo!! Peace and Light, dah
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    Tempestlady

    11/11/2010

    Thanks dah, a good old veteran friend. Miss him much....write on..

    dancinghawk commented on Graywollff2001 got Swine Flu

    04-27-2010

    aww, another great Valentine to a friend ... a modern expression for things that have probably been said for ... thousands? ... of years ... funny how even a get-well card can tell quite a story ... nice share, Tempestlady! -dh
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    Tempestlady

    04/27/2010

    He's an old Air Force buddy, miss him terribly he is my flirting friend. Married and far away now....Write on....

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