Great Writes!

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Great Writes!

eYes and reading that Again
I realized with both my eyes
that an S was there behind the LightS
One ruling day and the Other Night
The greater the lesser I don’t believe
considering the stars are in Visible Eves
and knowing too that indeed there ARE two
would depend on where We know to View.Them too.

 

Genesis ;)~
1 First God, made heaven & earth…
2 The earth was without form and void and darkness was upon the face of the deep
... The Spirit Of …God was moving…
4 And God saw that the light was good and God selected the light in the darkness
8 And God called the reflection, Heaven. And there was evening and there was morning.

16 God made two great lights to see the day and dream at night
32 Thus the heavens and the earth were finished, and all the host of them
....were A Just Write.
33 And on the seventh day God finished the work and rested;) ~

.Y… you ask was this d’One?... SO…I’m guessing…
25 …we could BE. nake d; together

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WordSlinger commented on Great Writes!

10-28-2009

2 knots, lol Hampton you are atrip, lmao, Izzy is so unique I told ya, lol, Great write.

IzzyGumbo

10/28/2009

Know knots! I selectively, creatively, wrote my own genesis :) since I didn't quite 'get' all of the one in the book... I took the verses I understand in page 1 anyway... ;)

Hampton commented on Great Writes!

10-28-2009

Well my dear you have finally succeeded in tying my brain in a knot. Send me a private message and help me untie the knot.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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