Grow Up!

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this is basically a little "play" of what i have known for a long time, but never took the initiative to do. i nee dto get a life, and finally i shall start, its well time i got my permit, and soon my license. i know that i have wasted my life, but no more i say, its my time to shine, for my friends, my family, and my shelby girl. if i wish to keep these things, i must work for it, and so i must have my list, to check off as a go. i have my job, one down, a million more to go.

Grow Up!

Grow up!
is what i would hear,
No Way!
is what i would say.

Dude! Get a life!
is what i would always hear,
No sir!
i'd rather waste away my life!

Grow up!
its time for you,
to get a life,
and stop letting the day,
dwindle away,
it is time,
to go out and play.

No way!
i perfer,
my video games,
i have a lvl 80 WoW mage,
and over 4000 friends,
on my facebook page.

Dude! get a life!
can you hear youself?
so what if on WoW,
you have infinate wealth,
this is not healthy,
you need to see,
go get some sunlight,
make your future more bright.

Never!
i refuse to leave!
i still have more sith warriors,
through which i must cleave.

Grow up!
i mean,
really man?
is Star wars and Xbox,
your entire lifes plan?
you can't just live in your parents,
basement you know,
i mean seriously man,
go get a job.

No way!
i shall never,
leave this couch,
my 360 is calling,
can you please go away?

Dude! get a life!
is all i can say,
buty yes i shall bid you,
a good day,
but dont forget,
that when all your friends,
have gone,
and left you behind,
its all because you couldnt lose,
this childish state of mind.

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jj1562 commented on Grow Up!

11-29-2011

i know too many people like this but then again they are the most interesting males i know

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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