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    haiku
    cherry blossom white
    quick love of rush and red feel
    fall lightly with peace

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    wagus commented on haiku

    06-10-2009

    Always enjoy these and want more when done as can't eat/read just one... try repeating your last line to carry this on to a second stanza and do same for a few stanza to make longer poem... as if ya can do one stanza well just stay on theme and do several... let the disectors later figure out what ya did just write what ya think... let the haiku be your border frame for each piece or your puzzle..... POEM........ and I get to eat more than one in one sitting.. Well done.....:}....wagus
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    stephenmichael commented on haiku

    04-09-2009

    Very pretty...
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    Madelynn commented on haiku

    04-03-2009

    I dont know what the heck your trying to say,but its cool!Your work is just so damn cool!You rock a pen.
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    Grito commented on haiku

    03-31-2009

    Arousing and stimulating!
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    WordSlinger commented on haiku

    03-25-2009

    So far Me and you are the only 2 haiku poets I've seen
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