Haiku 1

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Haiku I wrote when thinking of summer days soon to dissapear.

Haiku 1

Grass reaching up high,
Flowers waving in the breeze,
Sunshine warming me.

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kdarcy commented on Haiku 1

10-23-2010

Recently discovered haiku, love it, well done on the summer write, be well k

blueberry commented on Haiku 1

09-10-2010

Nice Haiku! A wonderful way of describing the summer days.

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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