Haiku #3

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    Thanks so much ApaqRasgirl I would have never seen the light of poetry!!!

    Haiku #3

    1) Crouching Predator
    2)Tiger, Tiger, Burning Bright -----7syllables
    3)In the Morning Light
     Crouching Predator
    Tiger, Tiger, Burning Bright 
    In the Morning Light

    By Brittkun and  ApaqRasgirl

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    angelchaser commented on Haiku #3

    12-27-2010

    This one is much better than the one I came up with for the middle line! Great job:)

    MindNumbing commented on Haiku #3

    08-27-2010

    AWESOME haiku, Britt! I can see the morning sun reflecting on the orange of the tiger's coat as she stalks her prey. Beautifully written!

    BrittKun

    08/29/2010

    yeah i was thinking of Big cat dairies on discovery channel. Thanks for your support Britt

    ApaqRasgirl commented on Haiku #3

    08-27-2010

    another fantastic Haiku.........and you nailed the layout form with this one........this is how you need to do the other two, centered......and you can take the line numbers off..........This one reminds me of one of those animal planet big cat diary people, watching as the sun comes up bright and hot as the tigeres is crouching closer to her prey......fantastic dear, you nailed all three........see how fun they are.........and yet another 10++++......I am honored that you included my name with these three fantastic Haiku's, when all I did was get you started with one line........thank you dear............love asha

    BrittKun

    08/29/2010

    Thats exactly what i was thinking of big cat dairies my closets friends always watches them!! I would of course add your name because i dont take credit for anything thats not mine it doesn't feel right to me.Thanks again for the support. Love Britt

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