Half Pages

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    Half Pages

     Pages and pages
    of half pages
    My friend wants to die
    and it's kind of contagious
    Alone with some beer and my thoughts
    can be dangerous
    But my actions are poetic
    instead of outragious
    Pages and pages
    of half written pages
    Lines never written
    forgotten through the ages
    Heartbreak that cannot
    be measured by gauges
    Aimlessly sleepwalking
    I don't know what day it is
    I offered my heart
    I thought I was courageous
    I ended up alone
    I guess that's the way it is

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    ApaqRasgirl commented on Half Pages

    03-11-2010

    This flows very nice and has a deep meaning, thanks for sharing great job
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    DennisScott commented on Half Pages

    02-11-2010

    I can dig it. This is how we all feel sometimes. We just have to keep telling ourselves we will bounce back.
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    knight4696 commented on Half Pages

    02-06-2010

    Nice Job! You've penned my story! lol! :) I can so relate to this one.... Great piece! :)
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    Marsink commented on Half Pages

    01-11-2010

    I like this very much with the fast pace and breakdown of some simple philosphies. to feel some consolation that a lesson is learned: of time and life, and then have no power to change the crisis of being alone.
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    GonzoHunter commented on Half Pages

    12-04-2009

    How could two strangers have such similar stories to tell. I know this one came from the heart walking through this illusion of life, cause I've lived it too.
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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