Hate inside of a dangerous world
Hate comes in many formsAn arrogant feeling
Thinking os something better
Easily feared
I am wanting
Something better
Badly wanting
A better world
Dont't want none of this hate
Hate inside of a dangerous world
6 Comments
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An arrogant feeling
Thinking os something better
Easily feared
I am wanting
Something better
Badly wanting
A better world
Dont't want none of this hate
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Charlie23 commented on Hate inside of a dangerous world
07-14-2010
- I hate "Hate" too. Don't want none of it... nice acrostic!
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SuSpence commented on Hate inside of a dangerous world
04-23-2010
- Great write, acrostics can be difficult, but you have pulled it off here. Bravo. -Spence
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MrGee commented on Hate inside of a dangerous world
04-23-2010
- EXCELLENT! the poem meets the criteria of what I consider a well written poem. the poem is concise which I believe to be necessary when writing. Also, the topic of the poem is very good and you paint a good picture in the mind of the reader. I also agree with the idea that Hate is not good for the soul. Unfortunately, the world is filled with hate. Of course, poetry is subjective. this poem is an obvious 10 from me. Thanks for the read. Mrgee
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jademelissa74 commented on Hate inside of a dangerous world
04-23-2010
- The sentiment is superb! I love the passionate message Aaron! Well done.
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BringMeBullets commented on Hate inside of a dangerous world
04-19-2010
- I like this. Reminds me of something Martin Luther King Jr. would say. Great write. Creative. Love it. :)
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