H.A.T.E

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    H.A.T.E

    i Hate the world and what it has come to
    i cant stand Anything at all
    i can Taste the fear on my trembling lips
    i Eventually have to realize that everythings not okay

    i Have no one whose like my dad to guide me along the way
    i Aint gonna put up with it for too much longer
    i am not going to Tell him to care for his eldest
    i Even cant get him to call

    i want him to grab my Hand and tell me its not my fault
    i want Any sign from him to show me that he cares
    i Tell myself that he doesnt like me and hed rather be with her
    i Envy kim so much because she took him away from me

    i Handle my feelings with care because im sensitive
    i cant stand All the things hes ever put me through
    i am done writing This poem because i know hes never gonna read it
    i hate my life and Everything is bullshit and i dont need that

    i use the word hate instead of a rhyme and it has H.A.T.E in every line

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    pinkc78 commented on H.A.T.E

    01-14-2011

    This is genius

    DeepEclipse commented on H.A.T.E

    04-07-2009

    Smooth style. How you put HATE in each line was poeticness. Keep your imagination alive.

    randa commented on H.A.T.E

    03-13-2009

    i love it grl

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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