haunted

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    When beautiful thoughts play in my mind, I cannot help but also play with words…

    haunted


    inspiration
    comes
    like haunting
    ghosts

    that thrill
    the stillness
    of my thoughts.

    still...
    the ghostly thrill
    that haunts
    me most

    are beautiful
    thoughts
    of you!

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    nhorlandi commented on haunted

    01-26-2010

    A strange haunting expedition, 'the beautiful thoughts of you'. Lovely!

    stellar commented on haunted

    12-18-2009

    I really find your poems enchanting to the ears...nangduduyan ng puso...^_^ v

    ambuya commented on haunted

    02-26-2009

    That is deep. As I read the poem I feel the insides of my shoulder bones. Thank you also for your comment. Will keep sending some more.

    zaphnathpaaneah

    11/29/2009

    thank you ambuya. keep well. zaph

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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