HAWK WHO GOES THERE?

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We get lost within the reality of what is and what we want reality to be but with Faith in the works of God in troubling times we can handle any reality... Don't let depression take over your destiny to BE!!

HAWK WHO GOES THERE?

I am the darkness of
shadows surf boarding through the tides
of despondency and dejection
I was an intrinsic nature
now masked within my inner potential
I hide amongst the blackness
of my perspective of life
drenched in the waves
of a darkening perception
I swim through the taunting memories  
of what use to be me
trapped within the pulpits of
realities bitter truth
I stumbled across the journey
of God's plan for me to breathe
in the uncertainties of my salvation
Is it my destiny to dream inside
this padded cell of illusion?
I bleed in the agonies of my mind
afraid of my true destiny...

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sevyn7 commented on HAWK WHO GOES THERE?

02-15-2012

very powerful write, depression can bring us to dark places, but we must allow GOD's light to guide the way.

aliciagall

02/15/2012

Amen to that... Thank you!!

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

aliciagall’s Poems (25)

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GOD WE NEED TO HEAR FROM YOU 2
LIFE 0
I REMEMBER 2
MIC CHECK 0
HAWK WHO GOES THERE? 1
It Ain't Right! 5
Where's the Faith? 4
He Doesn't Say Goodnight? 9
I'm Still Here 1
No Stone Thrown 2
DON'T TURN AWAY 18
BE BLESSED 18
HAVE YOU NOT HEARD? 10
SATAN IS HERE 21
YOUNG BROTHER, YOU SLEEP? 12
TO MICHAEL, GONE BUT NEVER FORGOTTEN. 18
LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT 8
IT HAS TO BE GOD 14
ACCEPT SANITY 7
I CRY 7
I AM YOUR SISTER 6
I LOVE 14
IT JUST ME 4
Mommy Dearest 6
Drifting By 7