He Lies

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  • Alexandria
  • havent been on in a looooooooooongtime >.<

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this poem is to a certain person who played with my heart :(

He Lies

Did you ever really love me?
or was that all an act?
Why was it that i couldn't see
that nothing you said was fact?

As far as I can tell
I was used. When the truth came out
my sensitive broken heart fell;
what was all that about?

You lied
I cried.
You ended it
I hurt every bit.
You know you
I thought I did too.
You lied
I cried.

Will you ever understand
that all I ever did was give to you
my love my heart?
Yet all you did was play
with my severed
fragile
messed up
broken
tear-stained
heart.
That thou hath eternally broken.

You know who you are
I'd run you over with a car.
Maybe with the next girl,
You'll think about her
before thyself, sir.

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Musicmynded1 commented on He Lies

02-08-2011

i like the change up in the poetry scheme... like how i write songs

Alexandria

02/17/2011

haha thankss :)

Alexandria commented on He Lies

02-08-2011

i loveeeeeeee thissss poemm!!!!! its my favorite poem i've everr writtenn!!!!! :D :D :D :D :D

Doo77 commented on He Lies

01-23-2011

I have been through this myself but never could put it in to words the way you have Nice Job!!

Alexandria

02/08/2011

haha thanks doo :)

abuelita1 commented on He Lies

12-03-2010

The times I have felt as you described above, is too many to count. But, now I understand that if I don't love myself enough to expect the best, I won't get it.;o)

Alexandria

02/08/2011

im glad you understand :)

TinaD commented on He Lies

12-03-2010

One can so readily identify with this poem! Surely we are all "one" in our experiences though they are different stories. Thanks for writing this.

Alexandria

02/08/2011

no problemo tina :)

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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