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    He has forgiven me, time and time again. He has helped me let go, of all the bad that is in my past. He has helped me stop, what I thought could never end. He has forgiven me, for all my sins. He is all I now have, to get me through this nightmare called life. He is, God, Love, Hate, Pain, Fear. He is everything.

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    Lolee commented on He


    I absolutely disagree with commenter dahlusion. He is in a delusion. "He" is Jesus. He, said "I am the way the truth and the life...learn of Me. That means we have a path to follow...in the bible. Please do not follow what people tell you only, back it up with study from the bible. Did you know that He loves you so much! Just remember to say His name when you call Him. Good job on expressing yourself with this prose. But learn about Jesus...He is worth it.



    See that is the beauty in writting, because He could be anything to anyone. You think He is Jesus, Dahlusion thinks it is me. I have no idea who he is and I wrote it. I know some people will not like this next comment of mine, but I personally do not believe in Jesus or God, he can be there for all of his followers, but I do not follow a God. I do believe that our fate is already determined though. Anywho, thank you for your comments:] It means a lot.

    cmlestrade commented on He


    This is perfect. For one so young you have a great insight into the spiritual nature of things. I am proud of this poem and I am proud of you.



    Thank you. Like I said before, you are inspiration to me to keep writting.

    dahlusion commented on He


    You are "the everything" here in this poem that you speak of. You are the god, love, fear and joy, the perfect human being.



    Thank you so much, you give me hope that I am a good writter.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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