Heart Breaker

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    My friend codie got his heart broken by a girl and he was upset and it made me mad so i wrote this. hope you enjoy

    Heart Breaker

     I have a friend,
    He liked a girl
    She took his heart
    and tore it in two
    She is didn't deserve him
    He was too good for her,
    but he didn't listen to me
    now he is heart broken
    from the heart breaker
    her heart is stone
    his needs repaired
    i love him
    so do my friends
    we care
    he doesn't
    he cried and so did we
    she didn't give a crap
    and we hate her
    he loves her
    she loves her new boyfriend
    he is alone
    because of her
    he is sad
    he is the same
    just different in a way
    she is a heart breaker
    so was he
    but he cared
    she didn't
    She needs to apologize
    he needs to forgive
    he needs to find someone new
    she needs to go break
    someone elses heart
    not my friends
    she is nothing
    but a heartbreaker

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    Jordan98 commented on Heart Breaker

    10-25-2010

    hey thats nice i have been thru that before with lots of ppl
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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