Heights

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  • Getting back in the groove of writing again :)

Heights

Here I am,
Stuck between my
Thoughts and my
Memories,
Who do I trust,
When everybody has
 Fallen away?
Here I’ll stay
Where nothings the
Same,
You’ve finally shown
That you too will
Fade away,
Leave me alone,
It’s all been stolen
Away from me,
I’m not anything to
Rely upon,
Climb up here
Just to crash
Back down
Even worse I’m afraid
Of heights,
Fear of something more
Than I can take
Pick me up,
To throw me down…
Well I can tell
Your hanging by
A thread,
You say as
You take out the
Scissors, with one
Last goodbye
As you cut this
Life bar from
Me,
Don't forget to
Smile as my
Life is sucked away
Only then would
The picture be
Complete
~Kaitlin Platti~

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BrittKun commented on Heights

12-04-2009

Wow That Was a breath taking poem. Was It About your death or someone elses. It Seemed to me this person had a ruff life. very good poem.!!!!! : )

BadBadBear commented on Heights

12-02-2009

A nicely written work of life's highs and lows. Hang on .. listen to the Fray .. block 'em all out so you'll have great days.

Platti

12/02/2009

Thank you BBB and that's the idea ;)

Teardrops commented on Heights

12-02-2009

my young friend you have such talent keep writing and dont let life get you down .

Platti

12/02/2009

Thank you! I shall continue on with my writing =]

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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