Hell

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i made this one on a whim, and my insperation for it is Meatloaf's "Bat outta hell", also, hum the tune while you read it

Hell

You can hear the screams of the tortured as the fires howl away, here in the lava bright. Singing maidens up on the wall, and everything as black as night. Here in the fire the Devil and Death laugh together as the evil goes on. And in the corner sits a scared little boy hoping this night will be gone. Blood runs through as rivers washing up onto your feet. You can only hope and pray as the dead wash away, in the time it takes for your defeat. As the line draws shorter you begin to wonder what sins that you have to pay. And your skin light up the river of fire as it catches flames and heat. Your tongue begging for water as the hot rock scalds your feet. The demons push you into the water as you wish you had something to eat. Again with the laughter from Devil and Death as they listen to the same old song. The chorus of death and the screams from the fire as it will all soon be over as they all end up dead and gone. Lets not make this one night last forever, and in turn its all we'll be till were all gone.

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stever commented on Hell

02-09-2010

i like this story..seams all to real..somtimes...stever

EvilPoems

02/10/2010

yeah it does doesnt it?

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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