Hellfire

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  • christianprep
  • done with my study it was hard now my poem is published its called Prayer Study and Poem

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I don't know is this the way i want it tell me if i should add on, take away, explain more, resite... cooment this is a draft

Hellfire

Whats it like to burn alive?
Worst way to die.
screams exaps your mouth,
youll wish that you were already dead
You'll scream and die right before you fall to ash
one of the worst ways to die

Think about the darkness that people walk in,
when simply they could walk in the light
think about it being to late

The'll be stuck in a hellfire,
were ther eccence will for ever burn
in terror they resite,
over and over again
eternal damnation

Its like that burning alive, but with demons
 burning forever
they resite

wishing for God to save them
only to late the beast has them,

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winterkou commented on Hellfire

11-01-2010

Im glad God gave us his son and washed our sins clean so that we could eneter his clestial kingdom when we perish. I long to dwell in that beautiful palace of his and exalt him even beyond the grave.

christianprep

11/01/2010

Most defenetly agree with you.. my wishes is for the unsaved to be saved before its to late... thats one reason why i wrote this poem i hope it reaches out to them in some way i hope they read it... and not be to negitive about it... I pray for there souls

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

christianprep’s Poems (44)

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March In Victory 1
Dateless 1
Prayer Study and Poem 1
A letter To God 0
Goal Against The World 0
Book Revelations and revelation 1
Mother Here's My heart 0
No Friend 1
Beast 2
Silent Tears 2
Rippled Heart 3
My Book Immortal 1
Danger Great Revelations 2
Abba 3
Saved 1
Mistakes 0
Showstoppers 1
Nightmare 4
I prayed to God 0
Eke Towed Prince 1
Soulmate 2
Asylum 8
Prosper A Fate 2
Hellfire 1
Dangerous 2
Broken Family 1
Depression in her heart 2
Everything You Reap You Sow 2
Tell me Your Beutiful 1
Cauious and Open 1
I am proud to call you savor 3
Simple flames 2
christmas children 2
MOSES 4
Not My Time 1
Just Time 3
Dawning 1
I am God 2
weeping tears 1
Dance with me 1
DARKNESS 1
hail third series 0
heaven series two 5