hello out there....

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    Everyone has their secrets.

    hello out there....

    today I am invisible

    nobody knows I am here
    no one responds
    no one notices
    no one cares

    today I am invisible

    now, do I disappear?


    today I am invisible

    I walk alone
    I talk to myself
    myself answers

    today I am invisible


    today I am invisible

    I see people
    Living people
    Everywheree

    but,...   today I am invisivle


    today I am inviisble

    I must keep the secrets
    Locked up inside
    No one must know
    Of the secrets I hide

    I must stay invisible
    I must stay invisible


    No one must know
    Of the old man
    I was so young

    He said :
    This will be our little secret
    so...

    I am invisible

    he can't touch me here
    but, there he is again
    but, now he is young
    a college kid

     I am only eight
    he is at the slide
    he  helps all
    the little girls down
    in his own special way

    he says:
    WE will meet again,
    We will have a playdate
    Why is he doing that?

    Is this our little secret?

    Please make me invisible..



    hello out there....


    can anyone hear me
    I feel alone in this world
    so insignificant and smalll
    my stack of feelings is tall

    no one wants to hear my litany?
    my fears..
    did I like it?
    what's wrong with me?

    hello out there!!

    why doesn't somone call?

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    REGINA2 commented on hello out there....

    10-24-2010

    I was also a victim of child abuse. I feel your pain. Please read some of mine.
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    Mandi

    10/30/2010

    you know I never told anyone till I was past 50... makes me wonder

    SEVEN commented on hello out there....

    06-30-2010

    This is totally wicked.....it seems like I been there too....Totally Invisible", but will they notice me when I subside?.....Kudos on this write
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    brokenhearted11 commented on hello out there....

    06-18-2010

    ah-freaking-mazing!!!!!!!!! love it! everybody gets this way sometimes, like you are all alone in this big old world. great write, keep it up!!! :)
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    themommyof2 commented on hello out there....

    06-16-2010

    I have felt that way on many days. I think you really hit the nail on the head with this subject. It is sad how so many of us are forced to live through and with these horrible feelings. Sorry you know these feelings so well. I know them too.
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    redbloodink commented on hello out there....

    06-10-2010

    WoW Mandi... invisibale this is not...... I felt this even tho I'm not a lil girl outside inside I am..... taken advantage of when I was 9 I felt then as the lil girl inside as you speak of...... Some one was there and is here now to take that pain mend them wounds and heal you..... I hope you have met Him and felt Him ..... for He is Jesus and His love heals all....... red
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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