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The shadows I see
watch me through crystal glasses.
Their multi-colored eyes,
like rainbow daggers
piercing my flesh.
They can see me perfectly,
as my facade is destroyed.
Their judging movements,
making them fade in and out.
Now the mask is broken
and they must abide by my rules.
The shades of my control
encompass and consume them.
I punch through their reality,
and the shards fall to the ground.
Stepping into one of the shards,
I am tossed into a sea.
The water,
it's glowing resonance,
and it's radiating purity
expand my space
and make my barrier porous.
I assimilate myself,
yet remain outside.

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redbloodink commented on Hidden

11-28-2009

very good write I got lost in your thought and feeling this is a touching thing to do to a reader... ty for sharing ... Red

blanket commented on Hidden

11-28-2009

I really enjoyed this piece, a bit angst-filled but driven and high caliber. Imagery is fantastic. You think in many levels. Good work.

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

Tony’s Poems (79)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Escape 0
Simplicity 1
Unser Leben....Our Life 0
Nie...Never 0
Freedom 0
Recoil 0
Du & Me 0
Lass Uns Rennen....Let Us Run 0
Menschen...Hu
mans
0
Wiederholung.
..Repitition
0
Balance 0
Finality 1
Zusammen...To
gether
0
Für Dich....For You 1
Mein Geist....My Mind 0
Uns.....Us 0
Fall......Fal
l
0
Falschen Anschuldigung
en...False Accusations
0
Sicherheit...
Safety
0
Brech Aus...Break Out 0
Shadow 0
Cold 0
Certitude 0
Truth 0
Consciousness 0
Sacrifice 0
Two Become One 0
Sleep 0
Broken 1
Punishment 0
Reality 0
Warranted Infliction 0
Sky 1
Solitude 0
Future 0
Lies 0
Rules 1
Unavoidable 0
Empty 0
Maze 0
Alone 0
Sporadic 0
Struggle 0
Impossible 0
Ambush 0
Life's Song 0
Geh....Go 0
Nicht Mehr.......No More 0
"Gods" 1
Wonders 0
Das Ende.....The End 0
Vengance 0
Obstacle 0
Gone 0
Ewigkeit....E
ternity
0
Release 0
Hidden 2
Incapable 1
Breakdown 1
Guardian Soldiers 1
One Who Once Was 0
Creative Process 0
What Am I? 1
The Overpowering Desire 5
Spirit 1
Insanity 2
Constantly 1
Present Existence 5
Pain Inside 1
Liebe.... Love 1
Banning Books 3
Iron Man 0
What You Do 2
Someone 9
IDK 6
Deprivation 12
In Return 3
Identity 3
It 5