HIS FIGHT LOST

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HIS FIGHT LOST

HE SWUNG, SHE SHEILD
HE HITS, SHE BUILDS
HE SAY'S HE'S SORRY
SHE SAYS IT'S LOVE

WILL SHE EVER GET A RING?
OR WILL SHE ALWAYS BE IN THE RANG?
WILL SHE ALWAYS BE HIS BAG?
OR WILL SHE LEARN TO PACK HER BAGS?
WILL SHE KNOW ITS NOT LOVE
OR WILL SHE CHOSE TO SEE HIS GLOVE?
WILL SHE GIVE UP OR WILL SHE CONTINUE
TO BE HIS FIGHT?

HE SWUNG, SHE SHEILD
HE HITS, SHE BUILDS
HE SAYS SORRY BUT ITS TO LATE
THAT POOR GIRL MOTHER HAS TO VISIT
HER BEHIND GATES.

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gregster commented on HIS FIGHT LOST

05-13-2010

i guess you whooped somebody's behind or some love battle went on.......nice poem chica

cousinsoren commented on HIS FIGHT LOST

02-09-2010

I LIKE THIS DEFENSIVE POEM. READ MY POEM, "A Woman Conquers Crisis. This poem requires a bit of rewriting, It's a bit rough around the edges.......LOL. My rating is 10. Keep writing, Ms.Boyd. What beautiful kids you have!

SBOYD

03/01/2010

THANK U ALOT!!!!

nhorlandi commented on HIS FIGHT LOST

01-28-2010

Good rhyme although irregular. well anyway this piece is excellent, full of emotions and spoke the truth right from the author's heart.

SBOYD

01/28/2010

THAKN YOU......

redbloodink commented on HIS FIGHT LOST

01-26-2010

love is kind love is gentle love is enduring.... but love is not worth a fight....... red

SBOYD

01/27/2010

I BELIEVE THAT TO BE SO TRUE.....THANK YOU FOR YOUR COMMENT!!!!

Kimmiejo80 commented on HIS FIGHT LOST

01-25-2010

I feel all the emotions you are putting off in your writing. Loved it.

SBOYD

01/25/2010

THANK U SO MUCH!!!

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

SBOYD’s Poems (7)

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Desires 1
Dreams and Hope 0
LOVE 9
FED UP 13
HEART SO COLD 11
HIS FIGHT LOST 8
Was This Right? 10