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Love calls your heart home. But yet, We allow our heart to destroy love

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Your hair is as soft as the winter snow.
It glistens and shines.
Making me aware of every little thing around you.
And that loving you is a crime.
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It reminds me of the innocence that a new love can bring.
. Your voice is heavenly.
Every time we speak, it's a gentle preview of how an angel would sound.
. When they sing.

Your lips are moist and passionate.
I desire to taste knowing with just one kiss
I could become addicted to the sweetness you possess
and when your gone, that taste I will always miss

Your eyes are a complete mystery.
For it leads to your soul, A place I wish to hide
It makes me weak I must confess.
But I shall buckle in for this bumpy ride

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My attraction is deep.
Deeper then any ocean and so much wider then any sea.
My heart is yours to keep.
With time, you will learn to have that trust in me.

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My intentions are simple and pure.
To hold you at night and love you in the morning
When you are sick. I shall be the cure.
Like a tornado. I come to you with little or no warning.

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Your body is a temple.
I stand before you. I curtsey and holding out my hands.
Reaching for the softness of your skin.
My ears wide-open waiting for your every command

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Your smile is a beacon.
Ships and Souls that are lost in love
Will find their way home because of you.
Your breath is the air, that gave my sail a shove

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Your mind is a treasure and Hidden behind your heart
lye's the answer to all loves truths.
Shattered and beaten but never bruised
I stand before you. my patience will be your proof

And I am the pirate.
That has searched endless water after endless water.
Chasing a WAVE that I must believe is real.
The current is deadly
But I can no longer hide, deep inside what I feel

The world is the sky.
And you are the stars that will lead us to our destination.
You as my compass, and my heart, my guide
I shall follow you without any hesitation

That is truly how I feel

So I as the Rooster!
Proud to strut along side the most beautiful creature alive
With all your wisdom
I know you will give this voyage a try.

I lean in as close as I can get
I whisper one word, a name my lips will never forget
That word. That name. Brings a tear to my eye
Without you. I am sure my heart won't survive

Today I declare! I openly confess
Together we shall set sail, to a world we will call our own.
A Nation set free from distress
And when we arrive a thousand years later that spot will become our home.

 

 

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